Remember
Artillery shells screaming from the heavens
Like angels of death
Air raid sirens howl in the night
Shelters full of fear
The husks of tanks blown asunder
Haunt the streets
Wailing of people lost and forgotten
Amidst the chaos of war
Remember
Artillery shells screaming from the heavens
Like angels of death
Air raid sirens howl in the night
Shelters full of fear
The husks of tanks blown asunder
Haunt the streets
Wailing of people lost and forgotten
Amidst the chaos of war
Mim's Muddle 
He’s doing Charlie’s posters next year, he’s heaps better than me! 🙂
Wow, my teenage poetry was complete rubbish. This is really, really good.
Very good. Descriptive. Emotive.
The brevity of poetry makes it such a powerful text. You’ve done well.
Wow.
It’s a very visual style. It made me feel like I was watching the poem, not reading it. Impressive. 🙂
This is really good, I wish I could write poetry like this
This poem is SO good. It is very dark, but the aural imagery is excellent. Extremely evocative.
Fantastic poem! Love how you built so much imagery with a few words.
Wow.. that is really good.